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Comment on Main sun k uski sub batain by R. Dixit

R. Dixit — Tue, 25 Oct 2011 15:33:18 +0000

” Main sunke unki sab baatain
faqat itna he kahta tha,
khafa hona mana lena
ye sadiyon se riyayet hai.”

Bahut khoob surat kalaam
se nawaza aapne. Shukriya.
Wakai kabile tareef her dil aziz
ghazal hai. Ek Sher batur daad
pesh kerta hoon.

“Shikwe hazaar dil main the lekin huzoore husna
lasb sil gaye , jaban hilayi na ja saki.”

Comment on Main sun k uski sub batain by mohaqqiq

mohaqqiq — Sat, 10 Sep 2011 11:34:52 +0000

nice…..

Comment on apanii tasviir ko aa.Nkho.n se lagataa kyaa hai ik nazar merii taraf dekh by hkhan

hkhan — Sat, 27 Aug 2011 21:15:10 +0000

Please correct this sher from the Ghazal “Apanii tasviir ko aa.Nkho.n se lagataa kyaa hai ik nazar merii taraf dekh:
by Shehzad Ahmed:

Safar-e-shauq me.n kyo.n kaa.Npate hai.n paa.Nv tere
duur se dekh kar ab haath uThaataa kyaa hai

It is like this:

Safar e shauq main kyun kanpte hain paon tere
Ankh raketa hai to phir ankh churata kya hai

With best wishes

Haseeb Khan

Comment on aadab arz hai first time in shaairy.com by Imran Younas

Imran Younas — Thu, 14 Jul 2011 15:42:29 +0000

so nice

Comment on ye kyaa ke sab se bayaa.N dil kii haalate.n karanii by irshadiqbal2000

irshadiqbal2000 — Thu, 07 Jul 2011 03:51:20 +0000

wah kia baat hai faraz
ankhe to khuli nahi dil kholgaye.

Comment on bekhudi ki zindagi hum jiya nahi karte by kumarranjitg

kumarranjitg — Mon, 17 Jan 2011 01:48:14 +0000

ooooo…..nice nice

Comment on Thaanii thii dil me.n ab na mile.nge kisii se ham par kyaa kare by Caligynephobic43

Caligynephobic43 — Sun, 15 Aug 2010 01:45:48 +0000

plzz add this to it,my fav in this ghazal

“hasta jo dekhte hain kisi ko kisi se hum
munh dekh dekh rote hain kis bekasi se hum”

Comment on mai.n bhii shaayad buraa nahii.n hotaa by Caligynephobic43

Caligynephobic43 — Sun, 15 Aug 2010 01:42:27 +0000

i heard second shair of this ghazal somewhere as

“apne dil ko tatol kar dekho
bewaja faslaa nahii.n hota”

Comment on Dil udhaas hai bahut koyi paigaam hi likh do by feroz

feroz — Sat, 03 Jul 2010 07:53:39 +0000

Shining star…you have aptly responded….it is so common in life that we do not open up when we need to…and regret it later

It is said that you cry most for words not spoken…..

it happened with me too…..

Comment on aadab arz hai first time in shaairy.com by thing

thing — Thu, 13 May 2010 13:13:09 +0000

Suna hai kisi ko “Good Morning” kaho to uski subha achhi hoti hai.
Par ham ne to ye mehsoos kiya k Good Morning aap ko kaho to din hamara achha hota hai.
So
“GOOD MORNING”